1.No the rain cant talk to the wind, the wind cant listen to the rain, the flowers cant kneel because their all objects that aint humans.
2.Some of the effects that the tool of personification brings to this poem its helping ur imagination and opening your mind.
3.If the rain, wind and flowers were real people they will be arguing because their using words as push and smote.
4.If the flowers were real people and the wind and the rain "smote" the garden bed it will feel so cold and freezing.
5.The poem empathizes with the flowers because the flower is a sentive object that can be destroyed easily.
Friday, March 9, 2012
Thursday, February 23, 2012
Music Simile Poem
Corridos is like the message
of my feelings.
Corridos is like a present
to my personality.
Corridos is as important
as my life.
of my feelings.
Corridos is like a present
to my personality.
Corridos is as important
as my life.
Tuesday, February 21, 2012
Similes
Sports to an Object
1.Football is like the ice ball.
2.Football is like a rollercoaster.
3.Football is as an excited as a rollercoaster.
Holiday to an Object
1.Christmas is excited as my birthday.
2.Halloween is like a candy store.
3.Thanksgiving is like a turkey.
Person to an Object
1.My mother is like a dictionary.
2.My dad is as excited as a game.
3.My brother is like a google.
1.Football is like the ice ball.
2.Football is like a rollercoaster.
3.Football is as an excited as a rollercoaster.
Holiday to an Object
1.Christmas is excited as my birthday.
2.Halloween is like a candy store.
3.Thanksgiving is like a turkey.
Person to an Object
1.My mother is like a dictionary.
2.My dad is as excited as a game.
3.My brother is like a google.
Thursday, February 16, 2012
Music Metaphor Poem
Football is my soul
taking control of my body
Football is my world
makes me forget about my stress
Football is my feeling
letting my stress away
taking control of my body
Football is my world
makes me forget about my stress
Football is my feeling
letting my stress away
Friday, February 3, 2012
Metaphors
The universe to an object
1.The sun is a fire.
2.The moon is a cheesball.
3.A black hole is a black room.
An emotion to an object
1.Sadness
2.Nervous
3.Hapiness
A person to an object
1.She is a Giraffe.
2.He has a heart of gold.
3.Marcelo is a chocolate.
1.The sun is a fire.
2.The moon is a cheesball.
3.A black hole is a black room.
An emotion to an object
1.Sadness
2.Nervous
3.Hapiness
A person to an object
1.She is a Giraffe.
2.He has a heart of gold.
3.Marcelo is a chocolate.
Tuesday, November 22, 2011
Tall poem with Hyperbole
I'm faster than lightning,
no one can catch me.
I freeze like an ice cube,
hardered than steel.
I'm hotter than the sun,
when you try to touch me you melt.
I'm hard like a rock,
and hard like a breek.
no one can catch me.
I freeze like an ice cube,
hardered than steel.
I'm hotter than the sun,
when you try to touch me you melt.
I'm hard like a rock,
and hard like a breek.
Tuesday, November 15, 2011
Alliteration and Song
1.BETTER BE A BETTER BOY before you bother
betting that you'll bring her back home again.
Try to treat her like you treat a tender lady.
Tell her truthfully that you'll make amends.
She'll be upset for a while.
But you can win with the smile by Mick Terry.
2.Couldn't keep her quite contented, could you? 'Cause you
caused her so much misery that she ached.
Go and get her gifts of goodies, gold and flowers.
Guess you've got to give it all that it takes.
You've got to give one more try.
See if she'll come to your side by Mick Terry
betting that you'll bring her back home again.
Try to treat her like you treat a tender lady.
Tell her truthfully that you'll make amends.
She'll be upset for a while.
But you can win with the smile by Mick Terry.
2.Couldn't keep her quite contented, could you? 'Cause you
caused her so much misery that she ached.
Go and get her gifts of goodies, gold and flowers.
Guess you've got to give it all that it takes.
You've got to give one more try.
See if she'll come to your side by Mick Terry
Thursday, October 13, 2011
RZ Thursday, October 13, 2011
Royer Zamora
10/13/11
1.What is poetry? Poetry is, an imaginative awareness of experience expressed through meaning, sound, and rhythmic language.
2.Who is likely to agree and disagree with you? My friend is likely to agree and disagree with me.
3.Does poetry have to rhyme? No a poem does not have to rhyme.
4.Does poetry have to make sense? Can it be random words on a page?Explain. Maybe, but not always to every reader because it depends on the poem reader.
5.What type of feelings does or can poetry evoke(cause)?The feelings that poetry can evoke are powerful feelings.
10/13/11
1.What is poetry? Poetry is, an imaginative awareness of experience expressed through meaning, sound, and rhythmic language.
2.Who is likely to agree and disagree with you? My friend is likely to agree and disagree with me.
3.Does poetry have to rhyme? No a poem does not have to rhyme.
4.Does poetry have to make sense? Can it be random words on a page?Explain. Maybe, but not always to every reader because it depends on the poem reader.
5.What type of feelings does or can poetry evoke(cause)?The feelings that poetry can evoke are powerful feelings.
Monday, August 1, 2011
Monday, June 13, 2011
Exploration
Exploration
1. Helpful- I help people do their work.
2. Intelligent- I have a smart brain for math and do things the correct way.
3. Honest- I’m honorable to people, especially on important work.
4. Courage - I am a strong warrior
5. Respectful- I have a full of, characterized by, showing politeness.
6. Organized- I’m a clean person by having everything in order.
7. Understanding- I agree with people that do
8. Creative- I am doing an awesome work.
9. Responsible- I do my work and give at the time they’ll ask for it.
10. Timid- I’m shy of new things.
1. Helpful- I help people do their work.
2. Intelligent- I have a smart brain for math and do things the correct way.
3. Honest- I’m honorable to people, especially on important work.
4. Courage - I am a strong warrior
5. Respectful- I have a full of, characterized by, showing politeness.
6. Organized- I’m a clean person by having everything in order.
7. Understanding- I agree with people that do
8. Creative- I am doing an awesome work.
9. Responsible- I do my work and give at the time they’ll ask for it.
10. Timid- I’m shy of new things.
Friday, June 3, 2011
Wednesday, April 20, 2011
Friday, March 25, 2011
Wednesday, March 2, 2011
Thursday, February 17, 2011
Friday, October 29, 2010
Who is responsible?
Jamie's story affected me by he not doing nothing about it and by how they treated him in school that was not a right thing to do.The responsible of all this is the guys who bullied Jamie because they always treated him like nobody and he will feel lonely.
Tuesday, October 5, 2010
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